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Josh Link's avatar

My first comic when I was eight years old was part 12 of “Maximum Carnage.” Been reading comics ever since.

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First: You've REALLY made me want to read the LEGION: 5 YEARS LATER run. At the time it was coming out, it was just TOO grim for me, too much taking characters that were all about hope and putting them through the Frank Miller grinder. But, given that time has passed, I can see that maybe that's EXACTLY why the LEGION were the best characters to do that with. And Keith's work is always worth looking at. Any chance there's a collection… ?

Second: I have a few rules about writing, and one is READERS LIKE TO FIGURE THINGS OUT. Readers like to be smart. Give them the right clues, they can connect the dots. It doesn't need to be spelled out every time. The most obvious example I can give of this is in my IMPOSSIBLE JONES series. I knew the character would swear, yet I didn't want to write her swearing. And I have a knee-jerk reaction to using $#!@@ in place of swearing. Hate it. So I decided to REDACT the swear-words— cover them with a black box, but with a little bit of the word showing. IMP has a sort of tongue-in-cheek meta side to it, so this approach fit. PLUS my 10-year-old son was SO PROUD when he figured out what the swear word was. And I say: good for him!

Another Rule: ASK YOURSELF "WHAT DOES THE READER NEED TO KNOW TO UNDERSTAND WHAT IS GOING ON RIGHT NOW?" Because that's all you have to share. Do we really need to know Captain Atomic once had an affair with Wild Woman and even he doesn't know the Terror Twins are his illegitimate children… WHEN HE'S ORDERING COFFEE? Chances are we do NOT. Now, maybe the Terror Twins order the exact same kind of specialized coffee Captain Atomic does— that's a nice clue there's a connection there, even if everyone laughs it off as a weird coincidence. But really, that's all you need to do right there, at that point. There is no need to explain— even to the readers in captions or flashbacks— the whole sordid story. I do this constantly when I write. "OK— *I* know this background detail, but is THIS the right place to bring it up? Is it in character for this person to bring it up? Does it help the story to bring it up?"

I think if you make sure readers have enough info to understand what is happening, that will solve all your problems— whether it's a person's first comic, of their hundred and first.

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